![]() There's a lot of prose dedicated to characters' current thought processes or thoughts on their past. This wouldn't be so bad (plot being a shaky point in Havemercy as well) if the character development side of things didn't meander as well. At setup the plot seems to have potential to be better done than that in Havemercy, yet as far as I read, the story still showed no signs of taking shape or direction, nor did the characters start showing much of any signs of taking a role in shaping their situation. If I had to pick a word to describe it, it would undoubtedly be “meandering” (and not intentionally so). ![]() Unfortunately, while I found the first book flawed in parts but still enjoyable, I gave up on finishing-or frankly even getting terribly far in-this one. ![]() Show More Writing non-overly-angsty character-driven fantasy that's slashy or outright m/m material.if they tightened up their work a bit, it seemed like these ladies could easily become favorites of mine. ![]()
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